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16-Writing a Personal Narrative-9



True/False
Indicate whether the sentence or statement is true or false.
 

 1. 

B.9

It would be a good idea to write two different endings to your narrative and see which one you and your editors like better.
 

Multiple Choice
Identify the letter of the choice that best completes the statement or answers the question.
 

 2. 

B.9 Choose the sentence that gives the most details.

a.
Josh’s test on Friday was really hard. It was a good thing he studied.
b.
The test on Friday was a real challenge! Josh was relieved that he had studied hard and was prepared to answer the questions.
 

 3. 

C.9 Choose the sentence that has more voice.

a.
We went to the movies. We bought popcorn. The movie was funny.
b.
We went to the movies and saw a comedy. We ate popcorn and laughed through the entire movie!
 

 4. 

C.9 Choose the sentence that has more voice.

a.
School shopping is a lot of fun! Mom and I spent the day buying new clothes for me.
b.
We went to the store. Mom bought me some clothes for school.
 

 5. 

B.9 Choose the better ending to the story.

a.
Although my dog is a real pain, I wouldn’t want to live without him.
b.
Exhausting! That is what Hogan is! He is a real mess! But I wouldn’t trade him for any other dog on earth!
 

 6. 

C.9 Choose the better ending to the story.

a.
The bell rang finally at 3:00! What a day it had been! As I left class, my only thought was that I hoped my teacher would be back tomorrow!
b.
The day ended at 3:00 when the bell rang.
 

 7. 

C.9 Choose the better ending to the story.

a.
When Mom finished trying on clothes, we went and got a milkshake.
b.
After a full day of shopping misery, Mom took me out and bought me a strawberry milkshake. I guess it wasn’t such a bad day after all!
 

 8. 

B.9 Decide if the writing is using a strong voice or a weak voice.


As she flung open the door, something moved in the bushes. Anna looked around frantically, scanning the lawn. Then she saw what she was looking for- it was Max, her dog, over in the bushes!

a.
Strong Voice
b.
Weak Voice
 

 9. 

B.9 Decide if the writing is using a strong voice or a weak voice.


Carla handed in her paper. She was nervous. What if she didn’t do well?

a.
Strong Voice
b.
Weak Voice
 

 10. 

B.9 Decide if the writing is using a strong voice or a weak voice.


Carla’s hands were trembling as she handed her paper to her teacher. There were butterflies in her stomach as she thought about her work. She would be grounded if she didn’t at least make a C.
a.
Strong Voice
b.
Weak Voice
 



 
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